I Wasn't Listening....
I was On a Roll, Dear Readers, charging ahead with the Next important part of The Chapel interior; the painting of the Temptation in The Garden of Eden. The space was laid out, the subject was well defined and all I had to do was be decisive and start! As I have mentioned a time or two on this project, I am trying to keep the style of my paintings to an early era, not quite primitive, but not entirely naturalistic either. I have found surprisingly few examples to use as my guide, and I am afraid that my creative "impressions" are colored by later more well known versions. Most of the representations of this scene are tucked in with the Creation scenes... the next sequential events in the history of humanity, and are therefore tiny and difficult to use. But I did find one good example that would be my main guide.
Here, you can see it in the bottom right hand section
of this manuscript illumination from the thirteenth century.
Mind you, this is not large...
the image is about one inch square and difficult to see details.
But it shows the stance and lay-out of the scene
that I wanted to try to capture.
And for good measure, here is a larger, similar one
that clearly shows the standard elements of this scene.
The Tree with the serpent in the middle
and Adam and Eve naked on either side,
and the "sharing" of the fruit.
And as usual,
I apologize for the dark picture...
As I said, I was charging ahead with the painting...
first inking the design and then as quickly as possible
beginning the painting of the figures...
And again... just taking the next steps....
But really, I was Ignoring that little voice
that had big misgivings.....
(it doesn't look right...)
(they are too "bulky")
And I will not bother to show you more images
of the failed attempt....
Suffice it to say that at a certain point I stood back
(a little hard to do with a painting inside the Chapel...)
and realized that it just would not do!
I am Terrible
at Body Proportions!
(I know this....
I have to work at it all the time....)
Yeah.... No Body is Perfect...
Buuuut...
There are accepted "norms" used
in artistic representations....!
"Aaarrrggghhh....."
It was clearly "make-over" time.
And as usual...
I neglected to take pictures of the process.
Lots of white paint in strategic places...
lots of "slimming" and "lengthening"
(Even a lowering of the picture frame!)
But most importantly,
shrinking their heads.
Adding the flesh tones...
Redoing the outlines....
adding the hair....
I am still not at all convinced that it is fixed...
I may have to redo the redo.....
(that even sounds terrible!)
But I am Not rushing it....
This is as far as I have gotten,
and I'm going to leave it here for a while....
while that little voice
becomes a little clearer.
No Rush!
Yes, Dear Readers,
No Body is perfect...
but Especially not my rendering
of Adam and Eve.
Betsy, I think your painting looks so beautiful! I'm sure anyone visiting your mini chapel would agree that it's a perfect tribute to Adam and Eve.
ReplyDeleteThank you Michelle! I am sure you know the struggles of an Artist being their own worst critic..... I have learned to trust those nagging voices... but it takes time to see the problem sometimes.... and courage to make changes....! :):)
DeletePrueba y error es lo normal en cualquier proyecto, así que tu capilla quedará genial ,veo que eres exigente, has logrado con la reducción de los cuerpos un paso de gigante, me parece que te quedará perfecto.
ReplyDeleteThank you! I am always trying for what my imagination sees.... and not always succeeding! But I try! :):)
DeleteHi Betsy! It's good to be back into the blogworld because I now can see again your miniature art works! Yes, we're not perfect but I've always known your trials/attempts will go on and on until you're satisfied. For now it looks good to me, but okay: who am I to say this...?
ReplyDeleteI've always admired your paintings in miniature, you're so talented, especially in your mini Chapel and Castle.
Excuse me for not catching up of three years of blogs, it will be too much for me to do so, I think you'll understand, so okay, here I am again.
Thank you soooo much for your message on my blog, I wanted to go back to blogging but I wondered: who's still there? It seems lots of bloggers still read my blog, I am sooo surprised after such a lon time to read their messages.....
Hugs, Ilona
Dear Ilona, it is wonderful that you are blogging again and still making minis! I could not imagine trying to catch up.... and my blog is always so long-winded.... I know, I love words too! Lol! But just knowing you are back is wonderful! There are many who have left for the easier Instagram format... but I would go nuts with that.... beautiful pictures and no explanations? Not fair! Lol! Thank you for your vote of confidence.... my lesson is to take the time I need.... no hurry! :):):)
DeleteOh the chapel!🥰 I love every inch of your castle project. But the chapel is my favorite. It is so darn beautiful! And every added mural improves it.
ReplyDeleteI can't see what is wrong with the redo. The proportions look right to me, but I am not the artist. You are, and your judgement is the only important one. Take some time before you redirect your attention to Adam and Eve again with fresh eyes. Wathever you decide then will be the right decision.
Huibrecht.
Dear Huibrecht, thank you for your vote of confidence in my skills! It means a lot! And especially that you enjoy the Castle theme in itself.... I mean, there are so few who would understand the history and time-frame I seek... ! (I know I am a little nuts about Medieval things.....) The project fills me with joy and I am so happy to be working on the Chapel again!
DeleteI'm sorry to hear Adam and Eve are giving you a bit of trouble... but that's what they can do best, I mean, if they would have been nice and well behaved all of us would still be in paradise. *grin*
ReplyDeleteBut it made my day to hear about white paint in strategic places. *even-broader-grin* It was worth the time using this strategical white paint, the proportions are better now. However, when I compare your painting especially with photo 3 I don't know why you're thinking of a redo of the redo. Just look at Adam's left leg and I really wonder how gravity could ever have so much impact on Eve's *ehem* butt. If that painter could "publish" this so many ages ago your version is according to my modest opinion just perfect for your castle's chapel. But us Huibrecht already said... you are the artist! And what an artist you are... it's so much fun to see this developing.
Hugs
Birgit
Dear Birgit, I do enjoy your comments! Thank you for pointing out the inevitable mischievous nature of Adam and Eve! But then again.... perhaps we are to thank them for giving us so much opportunity to "make improvements" in ourselves and our world! Lol! I see your point about Adam's left leg in the original and Eve's rear end..... yes, one has occasion to wonder about the artist's abilities! And this is a helpful reminder that perhaps my work is not too far off and anyway.... who is looking? :):)
DeleteYes, I am very happily playing with my paints and my Dollhouse Castle.... anything I say is okay is okay.... but as you so often point out.... I will know if it is not right and I will care if I don't get it "right"..... so Onward I go.... just slowly this time! No rush! :):):)
Has conseguido poco a poco una gran mejora y eso es complicadísimo en unas dimensiones tan pequeñas!!!!
ReplyDeleteThank you Isabel! Yes.... they are tiny (less than 2 inches tall....) and it is hard to get the right angle to paint on the wall...! But I will keep at it! :):)
DeleteForget the perfection, your painting is just beautiful.
ReplyDeleteDear Fabiola, thank you for your vote of confidence in my painting! I know it sometimes takes a while to get it "right" and sometimes it just is easy.... this time I need to work at it! Slowly and carefully! :):)
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