Monday, October 9, 2017

Playing In The Rain.....




Puddles....

It has been Raining a lot in my real world, Dear Readers, making the days so dark and gloomy that I hope you will not be surprised to find the Park is full of puddles! Daphne and Renee had spent an entire day indoors because it was raining much too hard to go out, so when the rain became gentler on the following day, Daphne was as eager as Renee to go to the Park, even if it was still raining. Daphne did not have a rain coat, but she found an ancient parasol in the corner of the wardrobe, and decided that it would have to do!

Renee had a raincoat and rain hat, 
but they looked as though they were not often used.

She was as excited as ever to get the the Park and see her friends the birds!

The birds were squabbling over a few soggy 
crusts of bread and did not notice Renee.

The fountain was nearly overflowing....

The birds did not mind at all!

Daphne could not help but wonder at Renee's fascination with birds....

Renee had eyes only for the birds...!

They were endlessly fascinating!

Daphne was not sure if this sort of obsession was normal or not....
Perhaps it was just because Renee was a lonely child...

A thought that made Daphne remember her own lonely childhood...
A thought that made her melancholy... 
perhaps it was time to head home....

Renee noticed the puddles as they were leaving....

Daphne realized she hadn't thought to look for boots...!

Renee ran to the next puddle and splashed in it too!

Daphne thought it wouldn't matter if her shoes got all wet, 
they could change when they got home!

As they neared the House, Renee ran ahead 
and when Daphne arrived, 
Renee was in the Parlor telling her Grandpere 
all about her visit to the Park.
This was the first time Daphne had witnessed this ritual.
She had begun to wonder why there was
 so little contact between Renee and her Grandparents!
"Grandpere, All the birds were wet" exclaimed Renee excitedly!
"And there were puddles everywhere" she declared.

"And I jumped in them!"
"They got me all wet... but I don't mind" she added.

Daphne was fascinated to see them together.
Clearly Monsieur Guillaume loved his granddaughter!
"Poodles..." he said quietly.
"Not 'poodles' Grandpere," said Renee...
"I said 'puddles'" she repeated in a whisper.
"Ah,.... puddles!" replied Grandpere.

Then he looked at Daphne.
He had so much he wished he could say to her.... 
If only his words would come out as he intended!
"I'm glad... you are.... here" he said slowly. 
"My words... somewhere... lose me..." he added, 
then shook his head.
"I had strike.... no,... stroke...."
"I think.... much.... words match wrong...."
then he shrugged and fell silent.
 Daphne just looked at him and suddenly she understood....
This once proud and capable man had lost so much!
Clearly he had not completely recovered from his stroke...
no wonder he spoke so little!
But just as clearly, he loved Renee and she loved him!
"Don't worry..." said Daphne. "I understand." 
"We will come see you ... more often... 
if you don't mind..." she added? 
He just nodded and Daphne called Renee 
to come take her wet things off. 

The Nursery felt warm and cheerful after the gloomy outing.
"Why don't you draw pictures for Hibou..." suggested Daphne.
"And draw one for Grandpere too..." she added.

Her mind was racing with the new information... 
she had so much to think over...
This put everything in a different light!
If Monsieur deMontaigne could barely speak or walk.... 
then who was in charge of all the estates?
Could it be that Madame had needed to take on that work, she wondered. 
And if that was so, then who was paying attention to Renee's needs?
Somehow, every answer only brought more questions!
Well, Dear Readers, it was just 
a Gloomy visit to the Park,
 I hope you did not mind
Hopping in puddles....
 Playing in the Rain!

18 comments:

  1. You've done it again. I love how your words wrap me up in the mood and emotion of the story. So much so, that I forget the characters are miniatures. Well done! More, please!

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    1. Oh, thank you Jodi! It is always wonderful to know that my stories are truly enjoyed! :)

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  2. Oh my... even in the miniature world it's raining... *sigh* But somehow the puddles in your park look so much nicer and inviting than the ones showing up in my garden or the farmer's fields... *smile* I can truly understand why Renee could not resist to jump into them. For me it's always a highlight when this fantastic story continues and this time the story developed once more with Daphne getting more information and seeing many things clearer. Well, and the fact that the more answers she gets the more questions arise makes me happy... because the more posts there will be. ;O)

    Hugs
    Birgit

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    1. Dear Birgit, it is always important to me to know that the story is really being "followed"... because it takes me so long to tell it... but I like to think that all the pieces are important! Your comments mean a lot to me! :):):)

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  3. Hello Betsy,
    Your stories about jumping in puddles make me relive my childhood days. Your stories are so much fun to follow...what a wonderful world you have created...and how lucky we are to enjoy it.
    Big hug
    Giac

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    1. Dear Giac, thank you for your wonderful comments and your great appreciation of the story! I wish I could "tell" it faster... but then we might have to skip the parts like jumping in the puddles.... and that would be no fun at all! LOL! I am so glad you enjoy it!

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    1. Thank you Claude! I really enjoy making them!

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  5. I love the scenes you create for for your lovely stories, especially the rainy ones with the puddle.
    Hugs, Drora

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    1. Thank you, Drora! I had to "make do" with the weather we are having... which means lots of dark gray days with no sun.... the only solution was puddles! LOL!

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  6. This was another good story since Daphne is gradually becoming more enlightened, as her relationship with Renee deepens.

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    1. Hi Elizabeth! Yes, I have to keep remembering that we might know what has been happening in Renee's life.... but Daphne does not! She has to put the pieces together somehow...! But that is the fun of the story! I am so glad you are enjoying it!

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  7. Heureux de retrouver les aventures de Renée et Daphné, même si c'est sous la pluie ;-(

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    1. Hi Jean-Claude! I am glad you are enjoying the story... it takes me a long time to tell it....! :) And yes, the rain is falling even in the Little worlds!

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  8. What a good idea, and so well executed - a rainy day in the park!
    Loved it - love you too,
    Mom

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    1. Thanks Mom! It's just been dark and hard to take pictures with no sun.... so here we are in the rain! :)

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  9. Hello, Betsy - What a fun time Renee had at the park, wearing her pretty raincoat and hat and splashing about in puddles. The plot thickens as we learn more about the interesting relationship between Renee and her grandfather! I can't wait to have more questions answered.
    Marjorie

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    1. Hi Marjorie! I had to make that raincoat really quickly once I realized that even the rainy day light would not be enough to take pictures if it got much later! And yes, there are so many things Daphne doesn't know yet... but the story will continue! :)

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